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Now friendz this story is a true one,cant say itz a luv story so i am leavin it on u to decide, the story took place near me, and mind me damn near me…….

Though it may not have any magical elements as in i.s of jazz…….

Nor any cyborgs or sci-fi adventure as fallen of imj…………

Nor the continuity both stories have……..

but it have emotions,that can nearly be felt........

Itz written single handedly In one night, so kindly forgive any spellin mistakes,

And yaa please please reply if u like it,and just smileys r not considered a reply,

Mind it…….





AH! First day of school. Everything was new to him, the uniform, the premises, the teachers. Everything. wat was old was the students. he knew most of them, they were in his previous school some 2 years ago.but he always kept gud relationz with them. some were even really gud friend of him. one and the best of them was nanu. he was amit’s best friend.

Then slowly everything came in place. No more awkward feeling. Even amit started liking his new school more then the old. He started bunking classes, yes just after a month, it was damn easy to bunk classes in his new school, nobody cared and those who cared were few.

Though nanu and amit were in diff sections, both were of diff streamz too, but they were unstoppable when they met. It happened usually at recess time or when they bunked there classes. juniors loved them, seniors liked them, teachers hated them, and principal cant tolerate them. They achieved all this in just eleventh class. in the middle of the session
Nanu was elected as the head boy and amit as head of cultural committee. Though it wasn’t possible without the full support of there mates, coz teachers were upset like hell by there appointment.

Still they were the same, amit never interested in galz, nanu never interested in anything else, one was head boy of the school, another was head of cultural. Comm. but still were in the black list of every teacher of the school.

Then the day came, they got their time table for annual examz, everyone was like getting crazy. Sum said itz too early some said they didn’t even got the time for preparations. But nanu & amit were relieved, they new there limit, they knew when to learn, how to learn, how much to learn, and they started there old examz routine, staying out of house without their parentz knowing it, came back at 5.00 am morning, slept till 1.00 pm, they stayed at nanu’s house. coz he had his own room above the house, so no one knew wat they were doing or were they at home or not.

Examz were finished, result came, both nanu and amit were promoted to twelth, now being in twelfth is an experience like no other. U r the eldest in school. No seniorz. So u make the rulez and u break them. They knew that now there result wasn’t in their teachers hand so nobody feared the teachers now, letters of complain never reached their homes coz, the peon was an acquaintance and thus never posted the given letters with our address on it.

Yes. Where were we, in twelfth yeah, now nanu and amit were like synonyms for havoc.
Galz and teachers never argued with them, princi never scold them,(he knew, no use)
In twelfth they also started a new hobby smoking, first it was like hobby then it became their lifestyle. They even started smoking in school premises, in bathroom, empty class rooms and behind the banyan tree at the far end of the playground.

Then their came the annual function, nanu and amit both were too busy coz of their responsibilities, then suddenly like a bolt from the blue, one day when amit was preparing for a stage play with sum guyz and galz of eleventh, there came a sweet voice,( a voice like an nightingale singing alone in the middle of a forest.), amit turned to see who it was,
There on the door was standing a girl, a girl he didn’t even knew existed, or was in the school, she said to him in that same sweet voice of her “that hozef can u please tell me where iti is”, amit who never ever listened to galz searched the whole school up and down running in search of iti(a classmate of nanu),he was so eager to find iti, that he could even have frisked the princi if he had the slightest doubt that iti could be in his pocket.

After that day, at home amit was obsessed with that girlz thoughts, he then thought that he was so surprised by her appearance and her voice, that he completely forgot to ask her name.

Next day,he searched the whole school for her, then he asked nanu that did he knew a gal with striking personality ,glowing skin ,hazel eyes, and an enchanting voice, nanu began laughing, he laughed for at least 10-15 minutes before stopping to tell amit that a girl who fits in that description, was in his class, amit thanked him and ran to nanu’s class, well he entered the class in such a hurry that he even doesn’t noticed the teacher was still in the class,teacher asked amit “why r u in such a hurry”, every one in class was eyeing amit.
He glanced at the class, saw that girl in the far left corner, with a simple smile on her face,(she was lookin like Leonardo da Vinci’s live portrait of the Mona Lisa, in short stunning)he looked at her for a second before realizing that the whole class was staring at him, he quicly apologized to the teacher with just a word “sorry miss”, and ran out of the class, where nanu was standing, he still had a wicked smile on his face, I begged him to tell me, who she was where she lived, wat was her name, and endless questions like that.
He told amit that the gal was daughter of the collector of the city, her name was zeba.

Next day amit leaved all his work on the vice president of cultural comm., and went outside nanu’s class he stood there for nearly an hour, just staring at her, he never wanted to move from his place, but alas! The damn teachers stared at him like he just mudered a 100 people, so he came back to the play practice and sat on a chair, without giving commentz or noticing when ppl asked him “is he all right?”, coz amit was totally drowned(u can say that) in zeba’s thoughts. To him her face was like an oasis in the desert of thousandz of faces, her voice was the most soothing, her eyes were like an eternal lake of light, her lips like petals of rose with dew drops on them, amit was totally baffled when something hit him, something hit him really hard, it was nanu’s hand.
That day after school amit just locked himself in his room, not knowing wat was happening to him, he just wanted to be close to zeba, he wanted to talk to her, listen to her sweet voice, then he decided he would talk to her tomorrow.

Next day, at recess he went to nanu’s class to talk to her, to make matters worse, she was sittin with two of her friendz, but as soon as amit asked them to excuse him, and they both obeyed like some teacher has told them the same words(he thought notorious repu. Can be real useful some times), then he asked zeba after the two galz leaved that, is ur name zeba, she said yes
He then asked her, that he wanted her to play the lead female role in this play he was organizing for annual function, to his surprise she agreed quite easily, he came out of the class,and thought over the whole dialogue between him and zeba, just to know that he had proposed a role to zeba that was already filled,(craps, he felt like screwed) but when will being best friends with the head boy come to use, he managed to convince nanu that heena(the gal who was doing the lead female role) would be best for anchoring, so everything was settled, now he can call a practice whenever he wanted,(actually whenever he wanted to see zeba), he even organized practices at his house, so that she can come there, he even proposed to send his car to pick them up, but she refused saying she had one of her own.

Then after an happy month,(happiest of his life amit thought), annual function ended.
Now amit was like addicted to zeba, he once tried to tell zeba everything but on confronting her, amit just asked for the accountancy book (damn it wasn’t even her subject), she reminded him politely the same, and amit felt like he would never be able to face her, then he thought of taking the advice of an expert(nanu), who told him to settle the matter once and for all, as she know properly who amit was, thankz to the play.

So next day, amit came to school not in a proper uniform, but wearing the whitest shiert he had with a navy blue jeanz, looking totally diff. from the others, but none of the teachers commented on it, at the recess time, amit once again went in zeba’s classroom,
And stood facing her for a second or two, and then he finally spoke, well not exactly what nanu told him, but he said to zeba, would she be soo nice to accompany him for a cup of coffee after the school, to which zeba accepted as the coffe shop was just a block away from her home, well, now that she agreed amit had another problem, (he went to propose zeba not to take her to the costliest coffee shop of the city, and he had well spent all his money on cigarettes in the morning only), so he at once went into the washroom where he knew nanu would still be smoking and he was right, so he told nanu everything and asked nanu to lend him some money, to which nanu smiled(a wicked smile he is famous for) and handed over his purse to amit, sayin “o.k. boss, now here is the bet, if u proposed zeba no need to return the money, if u didn’t, I want double of the whole sum”,
Now after checkin the purse amit was relieved that at last, he had more then enough money to spend at the coffee shop.

Well, amit and zeba both arrived almost at the same time, still in their school uniform,
Over the coffee amit decided to propose her, not because of the bet with nanu, but coz she was sitting in front of him, and was lookin like an angel, he just wanted to sit there infront of her his whole life sippin coffee and lookin at her, but he knew it isn’t possible so he dared to propose zeba, and finally when his sentence ended, zeba was like frozen.
Now she didn’t said anything for a minute or two, nor did amit asked hr anything, but the silence was killing him, then finally she stood up, and went directly outside the coffee shop, he ran after her, and just held her hand when she was about to sit in her car, and
Asked her what happened and she shouted, (even her shouting was sweet) “u ask me wat happened, ha, don’t ever try to talk to me again u…..u…..”and she sat inside the car and went gliding past me, and I stood there don’t know how long when, suddenly from nowhere nanu emerged and took me by hand inside the coffee shop, only then amit was aware that every eye was staring at him, then they went inside the special cabin meant for smokers, and as nanu had also heard wat zeba said to amit before leavin, he just odered a pack of the most expensive cigar and both of them sat there till the coffee shop closed and then went home, next day amit didn’t came to school, and was later informed nor di zeba,
Then after a week absence finally amit went to school not coz his name would be struck out of the register but coz he wanted to know why zeba gave her such a hard reaction,
And when finally he asked her, she said “amit u r not my type”, amit gathered the courage to ask her then wat was her type she just said “u r a bad boy, u smoke u drink, u flirt with other galz and I don’t want to be seen with such a guy”, amit now heard on his face wat students thought bout him. And he was more then shocked coz, he neither drank nor flirted with any other gal in his whole life, but that moment he wanted to, he wanted to drink, he wanted to do all bad things that can be done by a human, but rather he asked her wat if he stopped every thing and studied, and just studied, she said “well I know that cant happen, but if u proved ur word to be true, then I can think on the matter”.

From that day onward amit just studied he even convinced nanu to study with him, he left smoking, he never bunked another class for the whole year, never commented on any gal, even teachers started to like him, they now told that amit was a brilliant boy but they also cant figure out wat brought such a change in him, even he was shocked to see his own pre-board resultz,

then one day when the twelth was held after school for extra periods for exam preprationz, at that day after most of the students left and zeba was also leaving, amit gathered the courage to ask her wat did she fealt about him now, he stoped her at the gate just a ten feet away from her car, and asked her, she said “amit plz I don’t want to talk to u” amit was like boiling with anger, he shouted at her, he said “I did wat u wanted, I proved myself to be a brilliant and disciplined student, that was wat u wanted naa, then why, why don’t u wanna talk to me now”(amit himself didn’t believed he just shouted on zeba), tears rolled down her eyes, and the moment amit regrated his own decision, but now he just slowly asked her the same question, and she said “amit plz let me go, u r hurting me” then amit realized he was holding her hand, at the moment zeba’s driver came and pushed amit sideways, and stared at him, amit told him that itz non of his matter he just wanted to talk to zeba and then he will be gone, but the driver said “she doesn’t wanna talk to u”, amit was furious he just punched the driver square on his face,(which he instantly regretted as another bad decision, but the decision was made)
And now nanu who was seeing everything from a distance came into play and hurled the driver out of amit’s way, amit then saw that zeba went and sat inside the car, amit went to the car and asked her to talk to him, she said “I don’t wanna talk to a gunda”, now amits temper was above control he just went where the driver was standing, and punched him once more on the face, coz of which he fel on the ground, and amit just started kicking him, well thankz to nanu which now grabbed amit and shouted at the driver to go, on which the driver who was damn terrified ran and sat inside the car and started driving,
Later that night nanu called at amits home sayin he would be stayin at nanu’s house that night, nanu could clearly see the expressions in amits eyes, it was a mixture if sorrow and rage, he wanted to cry, he wanted to hit someone, that night neithet of them slept, the next day they went to school, amit in yesterdays uniform, when suddenly nanu was called by his uncle who is the D.C.P, telin him that a report is registered on him and amit, because of beating the driver of the collector, both of them immediately went to the police station and coz of D.C.P’s influence nothing happened and the report was withdrawn,
From that day onwards amit sweared infront of nanu, that he would never ever, fall for such stupid feeling, as love……………………………………..

And from that day onwards amit was the old amit again…………………….

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